Greyscale/Coloured Test - Flora

I've not been happy with how I shade and highlight recently. They're just off. To try something different, I drew my RP OC, Flora, all in greyscale. It's far from perfect but as my first try, I think I did okay. Let me know what you guys think. Maybe?

I decided to try coloring the previous version. I'm not really sure how much I like it but it's not too bad.

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Art by me

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